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Thursday, 18 August 2016

scary story

3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Jayden. I'm Dylan from Grey Main School in the South Island. I like your spooky story, the pictures you used were really creepy (especially the one with the guy taking off his head). Maybe you could fix up a few things because it doesn't make much sense. Besides that its a pretty good story, not very scary though but good effort. I would really like to see part two so we can see what happens next. From Dylan. Bye for now.

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